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Play in park

广东省珠海市香洲一小 SALLYS

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             Play in park
Today is Saturday, my mother close with cincture me and my sister to visit the Seaside Park (Sally is me. Billy is my sister).
My mother: Look, this is Zhuhai noted Seaside park.
Sally   : The Park is beautiful! The lawn is dark green, and the sky is blue.
My father: Certainly.
Billy   : Look at that lake! The water is so clear!
Sally   : Look at that landscape, the whole shoot taste of be will.
My mother: Let’s go to those big mountains, and let’s climb up compete.
Sally/Billy: Ok. I’m the number one.
……
Ultimately, my father is first, my mother is second, my sister is third, I loss.
Though I am fail, but I trust sans fail.
译文:
今天星期六,妈妈答应带我和姐姐去海滨公园(sally是我,Billy是我姐姐)。
妈妈:“看,这是珠海著名的海滨公园。”
我 :“哇!这公园好漂亮!碧绿的草坪,蓝蓝的天空。”
爸爸:“当然啦!”
姐姐:“看那小湖!那湖水非常干净!”
我 :“看那风景,一切让我感到舒服!”
妈妈:“我们去那个大山,来个爬山比赛怎样?”
我、姐姐:“太好了!”
。。。。。。
最后,爸爸获胜,妈妈第二,姐姐第三,我输了。
虽然,我输了,但是我的信心并没有失去。
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