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A Beautiful Park

常熟市谢桥中心小学5年级 小颖子

专辑:江苏省常熟市谢桥中心小学

Yesterday, I had a good time
   Yesterday morning ,I got up earlier. The birds are singing  
in the trees.
   After  breakfast ,My mother and I went to the local park.   
Everything was beautiful.The sky is blue.The sun is magnificent.You can see many flowers and trees in the park.Some children 
 are playing in the park.I saw many boats on the lake at the
foot of the hills. Later on , mother and I played hide-and-seek in the park.
   Yesterday, I had a good time.
 
(第一次写英语作文,多提建议,特别是病句和错词,请指出来吆!)
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  • 字数:460 投稿日期:2005-1-3 18:58:00