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My Pet

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My dog is very lowely.Do you like it?
  This is my pet.It's little.It's beautiful.It's thin.It's yellow and white.It's a dog.
  My dog has a black nose.It has two ears.It has two eyes.It has four legs.It can run very fast.It can swim.
  It can jump very high.It can shout'woof!woof!'.Listen!
  It's shouting"woof!woof…"
  My dog is nice.I feed it every day.It gets up at five o'clock.It has breakfast at six o'clock.It has lunch at twelve o'colock.It plays games at twenty past three.It has supper at six o'clock.It goes to sleep at eight o'clock.
  My dog is very lowely.Do you like it?
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  • 字数:458 投稿日期:2010-1-27 11:02:00

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    » TAYLOR0S 评论 2010-1-27
    -It’s little.It’s beautiful.It’s thin.It’s yellow and white.It’s a dog.
    这一段真令我汗颜- -。
    -It can jump very high.It can shout’woof!woof!’.Listen!   It’s shouting"woof!woof…"
    狗的叫声(……)好有爱的DOG。
    后面的……感觉像你的狗的作息时间表。
    ……真是一只礼貌且有生活规律的狗啊……
    GGYYXX 回复: 奖5分 (2010-1-29)
    为什么我的狗有生活规律?
    因为它不听话要被扁的。