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My good friend

初一 晓、

自己原创的。刚上初一。明天期中考练一下呵呵。很简单吧?写得不是很好。错的请指出。谢谢!(初一水平你要是看不懂那我就无语勒。呵呵大家都很厉害的吧)
  I have a good friend.His name is Yang Fan.He is a student.He is in Class Nine,Grade Seven.His phone number is 6497518.
  Look!He is tall and he has a round face.His eyes are small and he has a small mouth.He has short black hair.His favorite color is blue.He is in a blue T-shirt and his pants are blue.too.
  His favorite movie star and pop singer is Zhou Jielun.His English name is Jay Chou.He like a lot Jay Chou.
  He has a sister.Her name is Yang Yuwen.She is a student,too.But she not in classmates.She is in Class One,Grade Eight.
  She is short.She has a round face and a wide mouth.Her eyes are big.But she doesn’t have short hair.She has long black hair.Her favorite color is pink.She is in a pink clothes and his pants are pink.too.Is she cool?
  自己原创的。刚上初一。明天期中考练一下呵呵。很简单吧? 写得不是很好。错的请指出。谢谢!(初一水平你要是看不懂那我就无语勒。呵呵大家都很厉害的吧)
  初一上学期的。呵呵。希望大家写得不好别怪我噢。
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  • 字数:707 投稿日期:2010-11-10 20:10:00

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    » 1019729101 评论 2010-11-27
    整体感觉挺不错的,加油!good!
    » 失落的遗忘 评论 2010-11-13
    确实有点简单,估计小学五年级的都看得懂
    » 黄江铃 评论 2010-11-12
    不错,继续努力!!!!!!!!
    » 金日成 评论 2010-11-12
    khghk
    » 秋夜萧瑟 评论 2010-11-12
    She is in a pink clothes 与his pants are pink pants.重复了! 
    » 媛子爱武艺 评论 2010-11-12
    不是很好
    » 独颖嘉人 评论 2010-11-11
    开头结尾也不能少呀