The other wolves had no choice but to obey, they walked away. Jerry thanked her new friend the wolf, and the wolf said that he was supposed to do that in return. And so to show Jerry’s respect for him, she gave him half the bread, and returned home immediately to tell her mother about it.

　They had some bread that evening, and Jerry’s mother including Jerry herself all became good friends with the wolf; the wolf also had plenty of bread, and moved his home close to Jerry.

　The moral of this story was, if you help others and they will help you, you help them again then friends you’ll become. It will be a peaceful life if friendship is all around us; and that would be great for an important lesson.

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　There was once a little girl named Jerry that lived with her mother in a small cottage in the forest. They were very poor, and could only afford to eat bread. “Oh no!” cried Jerry’s mother one afternoon, “We ran out of bread, and it is almost time for supper!” “Do we have any eggs left?” asked Jerry, “No, none;” said her mother very worried.

　“Don’t worry mother,” said Jerry suddenly, “I shall go and get some in the market.” Then she ran off through the forest to the market with her basket. Along the way, she was quite tired, so she rested upon some big rocks. It gradually became late and Jerry decided to go and buy the bread, but suddenly a wolf cried out behind her; “Please, please help me!” cried the wolf, “I have a problem that nobody wants to help!” then he held out his paw to Jerry, there was a thorn stuck to his paw. “Is this a trick?” asked Jerry, “Because wolves like to eat people.”