“Medallion!!” shouted Jack for the third time, “Come on, I know you are caught up with this so called ‘Medallion’ thingy, let’s just go! Don’t waste time!” after saying that, Annie climbed up the latter all the way to the top of the tree house; “Annie! No!” shouted Jack, but he was too late; Annie already climbed up, Jack had no choice; he climbed up too, and when he arrived he found the floor all covered in books, “let us make another wish so that we could have another adventure!” “No!” cried Jack, “Well I’m going!” shouted Annie, he found a page with a knight, she pointed to the picture; and within a second they were surrounded by knights; “Oh no,” thought Jack.

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  After a few hours of resting, it was time to do some evening chores. Jack grabbed his notebook and pen, he put on his glasses; and tried to concentrate and read about his notes he had written before bed last night.

　“Going to tree house, many books on the floor; open page dinosaur, made a wish; arrived at time of dinosaurs. Open page frog lake creek, made a wish; arrived at adventure frog lake creek,” “Who is going to believe all these? Not my mother, not my father, not my teacher Mrs. Waltson…” Only his little sister Annie, she had gone with to the time of the dinosaurs, and frog lake creek…