And when people saw his statue shimmering in the morning sunlight, they would remember his gratitude for everybody in the town.

　It was a “Magnificent” day; it was already beheld the shoveling day.

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 A little boy wanted to read a book, but he had no money; he decided to earn some in return. But he had nothing to do, and so he just had to stay at home like usual; he was very sad.

　Suddenly, a strange thing took place, and he began to make use of something that he wanted to try. After a short time, he came back from the basement with a ruffled shovel in his hand. When it was time to finish the work that he was to earn money, he smiled happily.

　His work was to shovel snow for the other neighbors in the winter, because most of the times when snow was very, very heavy; some of the house doors got blocked, and they need to pay $100 for a builder to come and shovel the snow out of way. But now the boy will help shovel the snow, and they only need to pay $10 in return. At first the boy was not good at it at all, but soon he got used of it, and earned lots of money. When it was time to use the money, he figured that he didn’t have enough to pay for the grammar book that he wanted for school. It was not that big of a deal of very much; but was not quite things of time.