THE PROBLEM(2000字)

2017-6-1 16:26:44 [小学四年级英语作文]

 Since the age of 63 the manager passed away and the boy became a manager. It was a big duty that was on his honor, and when the time had arrived he hopped on the scooter and drove out the balcony. It was quite an astonishing effect, but it also proved of what the manager said actually the opposite of the single method was the people pray.

 After the most precious things that had been used, it was the time for the boy to return, but he yet never returned.

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There was once a little boy that wanted to be an inventor. It was a very big job, but it was almost his dream; and nobody ever questioned him about it. It was spring, and the birds began chirping around the forest again. The boy was glad that they were here, because he wanted to do some tests on them. When it was finally the ending of what was going on, the boy went across the fields and found out why the birds couldn’t speak, the most reasonable answer was: Because those birds couldn’t speak, was first: Those birds have no tongue, and so they couldn’t use their tongues to touch the places where they were supposed to. And second they have no teeth. That was why the boy became a scientist after that.