THE TURTLE AND THE HARE(2000字)

2017-6-1 16:26:43 [小学四年级英语作文]

He hopped about happily, and when he reached the line, he found the turtle already resting on a rock. The hare was so shocked that he lay down on the grass just like that he fainted. And so the turtle became the champion; nobody ever laughed at him ever again, and whenever some animals wanted to learn running, they did not go to ask the hare; since he was not yet the fastest any more, instead they went to the turtle to get advice from their new jungle running lesson teacher.

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 There was once a little turtle that wanted to be the fastest animal in the jungle, everybody laughed at him and said that he could never be the fastest animal ever. But the turtle didn’t listen to them, and instead, he decided to learn from the wild hare; he was the fastest animal in the jungle oh yes. In fact, every animal went to learn from the hare had become the fast runners too. When the turtle told the hare that he wanted to be the fastest runner in the jungle, the hare laughed high over heels aloud; “Oh, oh!” cried the hare, “Turtle, if you want to be the fastest, then you must get that big shell of your back, Ha-ha!”