THE LETTER THAT CAME FROM WITH MAGIC(2000字)

2017-6-1 16:26:42 [小学四年级英语作文]

 His mom and dad explained to him, “I guess we are a little bit hard on you, I guess you could watch cow movie four for once; and we are going to do the dishes and to do the house work for you.”

 He was very happy from that time on, and lived happily ever after. This was a happy and good and glad ending.

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There was once a little boy that wanted to live in peace; that was because of his parents, they were always bossy, and he couldn’t bare it like that. It was in the middle night when the boy decided to run away; because he realized, that his parents were watching cow movie 4, which was hilarious. It was one of the most precious stories ever, which by the way, usually means that it makes other people or you laugh out loud.

 Before even trying to get on his bike and bike away from home; he packed some food and ran away to the garage, which somehow the reason is shaped like a dog bone. When he got his helmet on top of his head, he biked off straight towards the park. Where there he placed a blanket that happened to be a sleeping bag; when it was done, he placed another layer on top of it to make it softer. Before that he zipped the sleeping bag and then he was ready to put the pillow on the sleeve.