To conclude, I think students should have less homework that they can reduce their burden, and join more events.

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　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Whether students should have less homework

　　Nowadays, the topic of "Whether students should have less homework" is a heated debate. Somebody says that students should have less homework as it can decrease students‘ stress whereas somebody says that students should have more homework since it can consolidate students' study. In my opinion, students should have less homework because students will feel pleasant since they can do more things that they like.  

　　 First, as for reducing student's burden, giving students less homework can reduce their stress. Nowadays, students should do more and more homework and prepare for the exams, so they will have a lot of stress. We frequently can hear the news that the students jumped off the building as they got a bad result in test, or had mental diseases on the TV. For example, according to the news that I watched, a students jumped off the building since he could not enter a college as, worrying it wouldl let their parents feel sad. From the above example, it can be concluded that students are suffering from stress and thus there is no point giving students more and more homework so that students can feel relaxed.