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孤寂残风

本人第一次用英语记日记,记录了当天的惊险一幕,我尝试用倒装句和虚拟语气,如果有错误帮我指出,在下感激不尽
August 5th Saturday          Fine
 It is Saturday today.I didn't get up as early as usual.Ather I finished my homework,having gone swimming in the pool.I think I could siwm myself without any help.Not until the moment I say"helping me!"did I realize how thickheaded I was.The coach gave me a buoy as soon as she found me.I had been saved at last.I thoughtI was so frightened that I failed.If I had had more confidence,I should succeed.
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  • 字数:372 投稿日期:2006-8-6 21:11:00