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directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic is good appearance more important than capability? you should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in chinese) below:

　　1)现在很多漂亮的女孩子尽管没有很强的能力仍能找到很好的工作，因此一些人得出结论说外貌比能力更重要

　　2)你是否同意?给出你的理由

　　【思路点拨】

　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一种有争议的看法，提纲第2点要求表明“我”的态度，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。

　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述目前很多漂亮的女孩子找工作更容易的现象，由此引出争议的观点：外貌比能力重要;表明“我”是否同意该观点并说明理由;针对外貌和能力提出“我”的建议。

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