the next morning i got up early. i was very happy because it was a fine day. by the time i got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red. in a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing. the sun was very red, not shining. it rose slowly. at last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball. at the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright.

what a moving and unforgettable scene!

5. 叙述与对话

　　引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述，可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态，使记叙生动、有趣，使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果：

i was in the kitchen, and i was cooking something. suddenly i heard a loud noise from the front. i thought maybe someone was knocking the door. i asked who it was but i heard no reply. after a while i saw my cat running across the parlor. i realized it was the cat. i felt released.

　　这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字，但经作者这么一写，就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式，没有人物语言，把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整：

i was in the kitchen cooking something. "crash!" a loud noise came from the front. thinking someone was knocking at the door, i asked, "who?" no reply. after a while, i saw my cat running across the parlor. "it＇s you." i said, quite released.

二、写好记叙文的基本要领

1. 头绪分明，脉络清楚

　　写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ w ”和一个“ h ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ w ”和“ h ”，但动笔之前，围绕五个“ w ”和“ h ”进行构思是必不可少的。

2. 突出中心，详略得当

　　在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。如：