When she opened her eyes, she found herself in 1924, the Shezow in that time saved her world from Mega monkey that had escaped not long before, and Sheila then said, “Quick, to the beginning!” then she allowed Shezow to drive to the beginning where they might save the day…

　Shezow at last arrived at the beginning, and she stopped in time. At first a dinosaur was chasing her and was very, very frightened. But the Shezow in that time saved her, she was grateful; then she found her or his or Guy’s report there at the beginning Shezow’s lair…

　The next day at school, when Guy’s report was handed out, he got an A+; and when Cally’s report was handed out, she got an A-…

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FAMILY TREE

　There was once a little boy called Guy, and he was eight years old. He was in third grade; one day when he was at school, he found out that tomorrow was picture day, and so he had got to take a shower. And before he even got to think about picture day, his teacher Mrs. Creature, said that they were having a project, and it was all about their family.

　The teacher said, “This project shall be today’s homework, and I want it to be perfect for I am going to tell your parents if you don’t do it.” Suddenly Guy’s sister Cally stood up and said, “Mrs. Creature, is it okay that I finish it on class?” “Sure thing Cally;” answered Mrs. Creature smiling, “But there is only one problem, it is that you must let your brother copy this report on your paper so that you could help him; then you will have to do another report of your own, or you’ll both fail!”