The beautiful spring, I love you. What? Are you beautiful, so lovely. You are a problem for revival is. Awaken your coming, the flowers and grass, trees and get out of bed. I love you spring, I love you in the spring. How I want to hug you ah.

修改后：

The beautiful spring, I love you. You are lovely. You are a season for revival. Spring is colorful. The flowers bloom. Grass and trees turn green. I love spring. It is warm outside, and I can go and play. 

修改老师：Crystal老师 

　　三年级:书王智慧

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