friends who can share their lives with me and talk with me about the true meanings of life. I dream of friendships where no uneasiness ever exists, no betrayal ever happens.
Making friends, in some sense, resembles enjoying music. I never choose bright music whenever I am blue, because the sentimental melody soothes my tense nerve and assures me that I am understood and cared and not alone in this toughest time, and because I will feel strengthened when someone can grieve at my grief.

简 评
昔日好友各奔前程，不同的背景和经历改变着彼此，这份友谊还能和从前一样吗?本文很自然地从回忆亲身经历说起，既而提出论点：真正的友谊应该以共同的志向、爱好、观点为依托，以彼此的了解、信任、坦诚和无私为支柱。所以作者认为，各方面与自己迥然不同的人不可能成为自己真正的朋友。
文章观点鲜明，立场坚定，虽宴宴数笔，但表达真实、诚恳，且文笔优美，情真意切，遣词造句颇见一定功力。尤其是结尾的比喻，贴切、到位，余味无穷。只是论述部分显得粗浅了些，没能进行深层的挖掘。若能再做一定的拓展和补充，效果会更好。
(点评教师：时丽娜)

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