l have a good friend, his name is Bob.He is a high school student.He favorite color is blue.He like to play sports.He like to play volleyball with friends.Sometimes,he also play basketball with meafter school.He is very healthy.He like to eat vegetables and frite. He is very kind,he often help others.　This is my best friend,how about you?Who is your best friend?

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　l have a good friend, his name is Bob. He is a high school student. His favorite color is blue.He likes to do sports. He likes playing volleyball with friends. Sometimes,he also plays basketball with me after school. He is very healthy.He likes eating vegetables and fruit. He is very kind, he often helps others. 

　This is my best friend, how about you? Who is your best friend?

　　初二:翟嵘赫

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