My Family
六年级 江乐诗
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My Family
高明 .江乐诗
Hello,everyone!My name is Jiang Leshi.Do you know my family?Let me tell.My family has three people.My dad,my mom and me.
My dad is a teacher.He teaches math.He is good at math.He goes to work by motor cycle.He likes going online to read about sports news.My mom is a worker.She goes to work on foot.She works hard.She is a good cooker,too.She often cooks many tasty foods for me.I am a student.I goes to school at 6:35a.m..I have six classes a day.There are three classes in the morning,and three in the afternoon.I go hone at 5:00p.m..I like beef and tomatoes.Because they are healthyn and tasty.
This is my family,a happy family.What about your family?Can you tell me something about your family?
小学6年级 - 记叙文 - 记人字数:595 投稿日期:2009-8-9 16:40:00
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