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My family【修改篇】

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这篇英语作文经过13姐帮我修改后我再重新发一次哒!
  There are four people in my family . They are my father, mother ,my brother and myslf.
  My father is a manager,he works in a company. I admire him very much , he's the man in our family. My mother does not work , she is a housewife. She does all the cooking and cleaning .Sometimes ,she often cooks nice food with her friend. My sister is a college student ,I am a student too , I attend NO.5 Primary School.
   I will always love my family, because they are my dear family.
ps:这篇英语作文我在以前的就ID写过了。但是有许多错误,13姐帮我修改过了。现在我再重新发给大家看。
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  • 字数:475 投稿日期:2009-1-30 14:25:00

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