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My dream home

天使恶魔的邻居 蓝葡萄

这是我第一次发表英语作文,望各位哥哥姐姐可以看看,可以的话请发表一些评论,谢谢。
My dream home is very large. There are at least twenty rooms. It has three floors. I have a big party and many restaurants on the ground floor. I also have a computer room and an art room. They are very bright and are on the ground floor. There are other rooms are on the first and second floors.
On the first floor. I have a big sitting room, a reading room, a computer room, a balcony and my own bedroom. I have a big bed in my owm bedroom. It is very comfortable and I very love it.
There is a bathroom with four showers and two baths on the second fioor. There is also a big bedroom, a big reading room, a dining room and a kitchen.
I also have a big garden. It has many different kinds of flowers. I love it very much.
What do you think of my dream home?
  • 初中1年级 - 散文
  • 字数:605 投稿日期:2009-7-12 15:54:00

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