以下是我给叔叔的信
Dear Jack,
I'm so miss you. I think you are a best uncle in
the world. You are kind and funny.
What's the weather like in California? Is it
sunny and warm? It's sunny and warm in Shan Tou. Do
you like spring? i don't like spring, the weather
is too wet. Which season do you like best ? Do you
having a good time?
See you soon.
Love， Dolly
以下是叔叔的回信
Good! You are writing. It is so nice to read you
mail again. Thank you so much for your nice words on
me.
I think the weather in California is similar to the
weather in Shantou (more precisely, I means the
weather in my town and the nearby areas). Recently,
it is sunny and warm, and it will be getting warmer
and warmer, I think. For me, it seems I enjoy all the
seasons in California, as we can do different things
in different seasons. In spring, I like to see the
colorful flowers and green grasses and trees. In
summer time, I enjoy water sports. The fall, oh, it
is favorite season. I feel very comfortable in
autumn, I have more energy. I can do a lot of
reading, go shopping or go movies and so on. Then,
comes the winter, I usually eat a lot of hot and
spicy foods during this long and cold season.
Beside working hard, I ofter have a good time with my
friends, mostly, at weekends.
your writing is very good, except a tiny little error:
you can change "Do you having a good time" to "Do you
have a good time" or "Are you having a good time".
Love, Jack