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happy holidays

陕西渭南白水 宁宁ok

这是我发表的第一篇英语文章,虽然也许不怎么样吧!但还是希望你们给我一些建议。
  This summer holidays.I'm very happy.Becuse learning English brings me happiness.English easy for us.
  One day. My friends and i play games. even though in a short time.but i known how to cherish happy time,and class learn English.
  This is happy summer holidays.
  • 小学6年级 - 记叙文 - 抒情
  • 字数:219 投稿日期:2009-7-21 19:30:00

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