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My hobby

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What is you hobby?
  Everyone have(has) thier(their) own hobby(hobbies). my hobby is reading books.
  Books are always our greatset (greatest)friends and the best teatcher. They give us all kinds of knoledge(knowledge). I started reading books when I was 6 years old. My parents give(gave) me a story book as a gift. I love it .So ,I love all kinds of books. I have been reading books for 7 years. I also enjoy collecting books .I have a lot of books about history、(英文没有顿号这个标点)storys、articles and so on. I think many stories for me are interesting and full of wisdom.
  All the character (Everyone)loves books, too. Books help them become successful because books are the source of knowledge and knowledge is the source of success.Athough I can not be famous, but books always make me really happy.
  I love reading!  
  • 初中2年级 - 记叙文 - 叙事
  • 字数:657 投稿日期:2009-5-10 14:43:00
  • 推荐3星:[1996118WHY]2009-5-10 14:44:22

    我稍微修改了一下。
    以后注意单词拼写,总体不错,语法需要大大加强!---- By VAMPIRE13 2009-5-10 17:08:22