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my school

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这是我小学三年级时滴作文,大家来看看撒,点评一下小女子在此谢过大家咧!
  My school is very beautiful.It's name is Xujiagou school.There are classes,a teacher's office,a playground and a computer room.Look,there are girls on the playground.I like my school.What about you?
  • 小学3年级 - 记叙文 - 叙事
  • 字数:171 投稿日期:2008-8-17 15:30:00
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