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见我自己没发过作文,就随便写写啦(不懂可以来问我) This is my first time writing the article, please give me a lot of advice.
  My name is Tom,I'm 13 years old.I have a brother and a sister.I want to be a teather.I think I am very gook-looking.I have straight black hair.
I'm of medium build and medium height.I like playing computer games.What about you?   Thanks for looking at.
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