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Tommy`s breakfast

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‘Tommy`s been to the toilet three times this morning,but I haven`t had any change yet!’
When my father was going
into the dining room this morning,
he dropped some coins on the floor.
There were coins everywhere.
We looked for them,
but we could not find them all.
While we were having breakfast,
my little brother,Tommy,
found two small coins on the floor.
He put them both into his mouth.
We both tried to get the coins,
but it was too late.
Tommy had already swallowed them!
Later that morning,
when I was doing the housework,
my father called me from the office.
‘How's Tommy?’he asked.
‘I don't know,’I answered,
‘Tommy's been to the toilet three times this morning,but I haven't had any change yet!’
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  • 字数:533 投稿日期:2005-2-19 23:05:00