中文：1月1日是我最快乐的一天。因为它是2008年的第一天，充满了新的希望。早上，我看了一会电视，然后再写作业。中午，我吃过午饭后去叔叔家玩。在下午5点钟回来之后，我们家举行了生日聚会，因为这是爸爸的生日，我玩地非常高兴。今天真是快乐的一天。
[1]It is January 1st that is my happiest day in my life，because it is the first day of 2008 and it is also full of hopes of new.In this morning， I watched TV first and then I did my homework.In the afternoon， I went to my uncle‘s house after I had already finished my lunch.I come back home at 5 o’clock pm.In order to celebrate my father‘s birthday， we had a wonderful birthday party and I had a good time.How happy I am this day！
[2]January 1st is my happiest day。As it’s the first of 2008，and full of new hopes。In the
morning，I watched TV for a while，and then did my homework。In the afternoon，I went to my uncle‘s after lunch。At 5 o’clock the afternoon，we held a birthday party，because it is my father‘s birthday，we enjoyed ourselves very much。It’s a really happy day today。
我的英语不好，是初一的，这个是作业，请高手指点一下！