my favourite season
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Summer is a nice season.
There is four seasons for a year.My favourite season is summer .
The weather is hot in summer.The Sun shines brithly.It often rains.
In the summer, we can do many things.We can go to the beach and swim in the sea.It is nice to eat ice cream in a hot weather.In summer, blow air conditioning is also comefortable.
Summer is a nice season.I always have a good time in the summer…………。。 ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………。 ……… ………。
初中1年级 - 记叙文 - 叙事字数:371 投稿日期:2013-11-13 22:00:00
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