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  last sunday.I went to the park with my frients.It was a sunny day.There were a lot of trees in the park.The air was fresh.I enjoyed it.Then we saw an animal show.It was very interesting.In the afternoon.I was a little hungry.So we went to a restaurant.we ate some delicious food.Later we went home.I was very happy.It was my favorite trip.
  Today I will go to the zoo.There is a big zoo in our city.It isn't far from my home.On weenkends.My father often takes me to the zoo.There I can see many kind of animals such as elephants,tigers,pandas,lions and givaffes.They are from different places.Some of them are danger.So they have to live in the cagos.I don't think they are happy,because they are aren't free.They should live in the forest and enjoy freedom.
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