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My birthday party

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I made a wish and then I blowed out the candles.
         My birthday party
 My birthday is on the 23rd of Sep.I had a birthday party.
 My last birtyday,I was very excited.All my family had a birthday party for me.Suddenly,the doorbell was ringing.My grandma said:"Tracy,open the door,please."I opened the door.Oh,they're my aunt and cousin.They gave me a book and said:"Tracy,happy birthday to you.Do you like the present?"I said:"Of course.Thank you.Welcome to my birthday party,sit down,please."
 My mother put the cake on the table and said:"Tracy,the party begins.Come here."I went into the dining-room.They sang the song:"Happy birtyday to you."to me.My cousin said:"The cake looks very good,let's eat it."Then we ate the cake together.It was nice.
 My birthday party is very exciting,we spent a good time!

                      指导老师:李丹    

    
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