My best friend
新港小学 邱如意751
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I have a best friend. she is a beautiful girl. she has short black hair, she has small eyes, she has a small mouth. she's tall and a little fat. she's very friendly.
Her favourite food is milk,because they're very tasty. her favourite colour is bule. her favourite season is summer, because she can swim. she likes riding a bike and swimming.
Who's she? she is my classmate, jilinli.
小学3年级 - 记叙文 - 记人字数:315 投稿日期:2013-8-20 13:43:00
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