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My mother

胜利.. by-瑶笔 瑶环瑜珥

瑶不怎么会英语,也没有老师指导.如果有错误.请给我指出.我也期待进步,所以请大家认真点评.谢谢!
   I have a good mother. Her English name is Helen.She is thirty-six-year old. I think she is the best mother in the world. She love me very much and I love she very much,too.
   My mother is a teacher. Her teach a Music and dance.
   My mother is beatiful and have temperament.
   Her like teddy bear.same the Chridren.She like laugh.She happy every day!
 
{说几句}:瑶不怎么会英语,也没有老师指导.如果有错误.请给我指出.我也期待进步,所以请大家认真点评.谢谢!
  • 小学6年级 - 记叙文 - 记人
  • 字数:335 投稿日期:2007-8-14 20:36:00
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