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1.My pen friend

厦门市高殿中心小学六年二班叶叶 雪凌慧慧

这是一篇很短的英语小作文,不过还是希望大家帮我修改修改哦,Thanks for everyoneXXX
         1. My pen friend
My pen friend is Linda .She is a beautiful girl .She can sing mang songs .And she can swim .She is tall .She like apples .She also likes bananas .She often goes to SM .She like rending .She doesn’t like playing with dolls .This is my pen friend .Do you want to write to my pen friend?
      
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  • 字数:271 投稿日期:2007-6-2 23:19:00
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