初中3年级 - 诗歌 阅读指导

I have a dream

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I have a dream.帮忙评论下。自己写的。《勿改格式》首发带图
               I have a dream.
        I have a perfect dream.
        I have a wonderful dream.
        
        What is perfect dream?
        The perfect dream is China dream.
        
        What is China dream?
        China dream is more and more strong.
        
        What is wonderful dream?
        The wonderful dream is my dream.
        
        What is my dream?
        My dream is China than Japan's strong.
        
        
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