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我的姐姐

潮州市湘桥区昌黎路小学602班 天夏WYH

我这一篇短文是在5年级写的,写得不是很好,请大家看看,给我一点建议吧!
    
     I have a sister . She is 19 years old . She is 5 years older than me . She is 162cm. I'm 158cm. She is 4cm than me . She is very active. But I'm very quiet. She like playing the violi and reading books. But I like fly kites.  This is my sister . Do you know something about her?
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  • 字数:216 投稿日期:2007-5-17 19:17:00