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My funny little cousin

6 EDENLEE

please pointing out the mistake.
In one hot summer, our family has gone out to the best water park of our area. When we arrive there my little cousin was so panic, because he come to that water park before.When we was getting our own little room to get changed, my cousin got a little room just right next to me, which I could see the sweat on his face and his leg shaking. We when all out of our change room. The parents said we allowed to play on our own, while they going to the big pool to swim. We come to the area where the children was playing at, My two cousins saw a child been flushing down the hole and then a splash the child was in pool, which is right in front of us.
 “Cool!”said my little cousin who was wiping the water on his face at the same time.
  Then I was turn around try to talk to him and he was not there. He was already run up the stairs to play it. 
  “That was amazing!”said my little cousin who was still look towards the flushing stuff.Me and my elder cousin was still laguahing at my little cousin, because he fell in the by accdiently.
   When the parents come here and said it is the time that we should left.when we walking towards our cars my little cousin asked if we could come another time.
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