初中1年级 - 记叙文 - 叙事 阅读指导

　　My is a Chinese girl,I very like my home ,because it's nice. have six peple.My mother is a English teacher .she teachs 7 clss.she is a good teacher. My father is a math teacher.he teacher 7 clss too. My sister is a student . she is seven years old.she and I are firend. her favorite subject is art,my favorite subject is English and math,And you?On wekeed we go to park.we are very happy. Then I and my family go to a movie I like thrill but my sister likes Beijing oper,I think it's boring .My parents like comdey. oh! It's funny. we like it.I love my family!
　　写的不好请大家多多指教，请大家为我做出点评，使我得以改正，如果可以请大家介绍一些好的写英语作文的方法，谢谢！