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My beautiful vacation

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专辑:山东平阴县第四中学《小荷文苑》

初一的课堂作文,比较少。语法上应该没有错吧?希望支持啊!
  I had a beautiful vacation on last year.I went to Beijing city with my
  best friend,Tina.We took a train.It was very long and took me 3 hours.
  First, we went to the KFC. Then,we ate two cups of ice cream and had
  two sandwichs.After breakfast,we went to a zoo.Tina saw a koala.It was very
  cute! And I saw a panda.Panda was smart.Next,we went to the Great Wall.
  There were many people and there were really busy! After thet,I went to
  an aquqrium with Tina.First,we watched a movie octopus.Then,we watched a
  seal show.It was very beatiful!Next,we ate a Beijing'Duck.After lunch,
  we went to a Gift Shop and bought a gift.Next,we saw a singer,Jay Zhou.
  I had his autugraph.We really very happy!
  My vacation was beatiful!
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  • 字数:591 投稿日期:2009-12-11 19:31:00

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