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背后的我

经五路小学 宰翔

The name of my essay is the big day,for i am on the way to make friend on this day.A friend in need is a friend indeed.
  I am very happy that i find (found)[应该用过去式] the webside (website) of the English study room this noon . I am a self-taught student and i dream (that) i can make a lot of friends that love english studying .I have no chance to be a school student but i believe hard work can equal to the smart. There were only two creatures that can get the top of the high point the eagle and the snail .The eagle may get the target very easily but the snail is much more difficult but if there (is) a friend who can do him a favor maybe he can get the point more easy .
The name of my essay is the big day ,for i am on the way to make friend on this day .A friend in need is a friend indeed .
作者:山东济南 宰翔
  • 小学6年级 - 散文
  • 字数:544 投稿日期:2009-12-26 14:34:00
  • 作文题目有点问题。---- By BBS 2009-12-26 14:43:13