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Snow White(白雪公主)

中学一年级 茌若

Long long ago, in the magnificent castle, lived a pretty princess.....
  由于我的英语水平有限,所以对白雪公主有所改编,请勿和原著比较,这仅称得上是茌若氏白雪公主。      ——题记          
  Long long ago, in the magnificent castle, lived a pretty princess. Her name is Snow White. Her mother died. Therefore king got married again. She had a step mother, but her step mother was very bad,beacuse she is awitch. The Snow White was very scared, beacuse she is pure, white and lovely. So witch was jealous of Snow White, she is very angry.
  One day,she asked a hunter to kill the Snow White, but the hunter saw the Snow White very beautiful, so let Snow White escape, Snow Whit ran faster and faster, she arrived the forest, unexpectedly, she saw a small log cabin. Here was Dwarf's home, she ate some food, lay on a small bed, quietly sleeping. After a while, Dwarfs came back, they discovered a Snow White and they are very happy. After Snow White waked up, Dwarfs knew her story, they all hated Snow White's step mother, they helped the Snow White. She was very happy. Witch knew Snow White didn't die, she was very angry, she made up an old woman and brought Snow White the poisonous apple. After Snow White eat it. She fell down the ground, Dwarfs were very sad, they were crying and put Snow White in the crystal coffin. After a while, a handsome prince arrived Dwarf's home, he opened the crystal coffin, saw Snow White and thought she was very pretty. So he kissed the Snow White ,at this time, Snow White woke up and spit out the the poisonous apple. She was happy. Then they got married. After old king die, the prince became the king, Snow White became the queen, they had many sons and daughters, the life was very happy.
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    » 诚实并不难 评论 2008-1-1
    你的英语水平太棒了,羡慕啊,不过...........写的也满好的...........呵呵.......
    » XXXXXXXXXX 评论 2007-4-27
    不知道是不是~
    百度上好象有..
    不好意思
    问一下..
    茌若 回复: (2007-6-1)
    我砸不晓得里?要是有也是他们抄我的
    » 小少女 评论 2007-4-25
    写的很好,继续加油用英语也能写得这么棒,真是厉害英语功底不错,继续加油
    。加油哦!呵呵,小弟虽然有些看不懂,但姐姐能用英语写出这样的作文已经很厉害了,看来我也要努力学好呀!
    » 伤心天使 评论 2007-3-10
    写的很好,继续加油
    » LIUQINQIN 评论 2007-2-10
    妹妹不错嘛,好棒啊~~~~有时间我们来比比啊,让我们共同进步~~~~
    呵呵~~~`支持啊~~~加分~~~~
    » 雪花冰晶 评论 2007-2-5
    我觉得不错的,你的英语学得不错嘛,别灰心,继续加油哦!!!
    茌若 回复: (2007-2-6)
    谢谢
    » 李艳厉害 评论 2006-12-9
    真的不错哦!俺也是学习英语忠实者,有机会,咱两切磋切磋一下.共同进步.
    我说那个管理员真的没有眼光,你的作文应该进精品区的
    » 尼乡 评论 2006-12-8
    写的不错,给你投一票,记住我这个忠诚的朋友尼乡
    » QLYOU1 评论 2006-11-18
    什么东西啊,一看也不是自己写的啊~
    茌若 回复: (2006-11-20)
    拜托,我上英语足有五年了,不算学校里面的,看不动别诽谤别人嘛!!!
    » QLYOU1 评论 2006-11-18
    什么东西啊
    茌若 回复: (2006-11-20)
    拜托,我上英语足有五年了,不算学校里面的,看不动别诽谤别人嘛!!!
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