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GUOYIWEI

我的一篇英语小短文。给点意见吧!记得打分拉票哦~~~
My name is guoyiwei。I‘m a girl of eleven .I am a student. I live in tall building in city of hefei. My home near the school. I go to school early everyday。In my family there are three people。My mother, father and I。 My father is a engineer he’s 40。My mother is a teacher,She's 39。 she works at my school。 They go to work by bus.They often come back home at six in the afternoon.They are busy all day. I'm a primary school student.I usually get up at haif past six in the morning and go to school at twenty past seven.I go to school on foot I have four classes in the morning and three classes in the afternoon 。
 This is my family.They love me。I love my family!
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  • 字数:532 投稿日期:2004-5-5 9:58:00