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Only drink clean water(课文改写)

西安西一路小学一年级 含芝

One day, Simon’s mum with Daming and Simon went to a park.Simon’s mum bring a basket of fruit.Daming said to Simon’s mum:“This is a beautiful park, Aunt.”
 
One day, Simon’s mum with Daming and Simon went to a park.Simon’s mum bring a basket of fruit.Daming said to Simon’s mum: “This is a beautiful park, Aunt.”
His Aunt said: “Yes, we come here often.”
This time.His cousin Simon said: “Mum.Can we have our picnic now?I’m hungry.”
Daming said, too: “And I’m thirsty.”
Simon’s mum said: “Yes, of course. Here are your sandwichs.”
Simon and Daming said: “Thank you.”
But Simon’s mum look at the basket, said: “Oh no!I didn’t bring any drinks!I forgot!”
Simon and Daming shouted: “Oh no!”
Then Daming’s cousin Simon see a very big stone bowl has lot
of water, said: “Don’t worry, Mum.We can drink water here.”
Simon’s mum said: “Only drink clean water.”
Simon careful look the water again.Said to his mum: “This water is very clean!”
Daming said, too: “And good.”
“It’s fun to drink this way!”Simon said.
Simon and Daming are laughing: “Ha, ha, ha.”And then they are having their picnic.
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