初中2年级 - 诗歌 阅读指导

Emptiness.

中国北京三帆中学初二十班,不曾离开,不曾离开! VAMPIRE13

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这是我写过最无语的一首诗。
Emptiness
       
          
       If there were                       If there were
    no colors,emptiness             no sounds, emptiness
will fill our eyes                     will invade our ears
If there were no matters   , emptiness will over flow the earth
If the world varnishes, emptiness will have emptiness accompany
 If the sun left                         The moon would cry
   If the sky fades               the ground would wither
     If dawn rises              the evening would sleep
       If cloud cries              the fire would die
         If you were gone      then that will leave
           An enormous emptiness deep inside.
             That’s all I have-Loneliness
                     On the lonely
                         side
 
  不要调整格式。这就是我要的格式。
  这个类型的诗歌可能在中国很少见。是用文字拼成一个图形,而恰好这个图形和文字由有关联。至于这首诗和图形的关联,还要看大家的理解能力。
  • 初中2年级 - 诗歌
  • 字数:503 投稿日期:2008-3-14 9:42:00
  • 推荐3星:[水冰清]2008-3-14 10:10:02
    有意思---- By 茅寒春 2008-3-14 10:58:29