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我的父亲(英语版)

清水轩洛阳阁 凌伊儿

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英语作文里经常会有语法等错误,希望大家能帮忙找一下,提出宝贵意见。伊儿谢过!
My father
I think my father is a kind man, he love help people, and always forget to do something for himself. He has a good sence of humor, yes, I like that. That always make us happy.
I think he is a friend of mine. Because he always talk with me. I often feel I am not his daughter but his friend.
I think that my father is a good father and also a good worker. He works very hard. So he can’t play with me or my mum for long time. He think work will make him happy because work has many funny. So he always teaches me: don’t think work is a hard thing.
My father has many hobby. For example, he like reading, and he also like play computer game. He use his hobby to realx. He can feel very happy if he work, and also play.
He is a good man, isn’t he?
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  • 字数:597 投稿日期:2007-8-31 16:29:00
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