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A Shining Star《一颗闪亮的星》

叶霖佳小学 孤单海&感恩之女

初次文章运用上英语,应有地方不足,请各位多指教!
          A Shining Star《一颗闪亮的星》


   A good teacher is like a shining star to students Miss Cai, my senior high school English teacher, is a shining star in my life
When I began my senior high school years, I had difficulty in learning English I dared not speak English aloud in public because of my poor pronunciation and intonation I could not get high marks and my grammar was not right at all Frustrated and afraid of being laughed at, I never put up my hand to answer questions in English class When Miss Cai found out my situation, she encouraged me and lent me a hand She patiently taught me English grammar, helped me understand how to write a good sentence,and lent me many English books and magazines, which rapidly improved my English With her help, I became interested in English and eventually got high marks
  Miss Cai, like a shining star, shines in my path of success 一个好老师对学生来说就像一颗闪亮的星。蔡老师,我小学时的英语老师,就是我生命中一颗闪亮的星。
  刚上小学时,我英语学得很吃力。我不敢在公开场合开口说英语,因为我的语音、语调很糟糕。英语成绩很差’,语法一蹋糊涂。灰心、失望、羞于被嘲笑,所以英语课上我从来不单手回答问题。蔡老师发现我的情况后,向我伸出了援助之手,鼓励我。她认真地教我语法,教我如何写好句子,还借给我许多英语书和杂志。这一切都使得我很快提高了英语水平。在她的帮助下,我渐渐对英语感兴趣了,成绩也提高了。
  蔡老师,就像一颗闪亮的星照耀着我前进的道路。 A good teacher is like a shining star to students My senior high school English teacher called Miss Cai is such a shining star in my life
When I began my study in senior high school, I came across difficulty in my English study and I was one of the weakest sudents in English in my class Fortunately, Miss Cai lent me a hand She introduced to me the way of English study and created a lot of chances for me to practise my spoken English in class With her help, I caught up with my classmates in English I became interested in English From then on English has been my favorite subject
  Miss Cai, like a shining star, shines on my way to success 一个好老师对学生采说就像一颗闪亮的星。我小学时的英语老师,蔡老师就是我生命中一颗闪亮的星。
  我刚上小学时;英语学得很吃力,是班上英语最差的学生之一。幸运的是,蔡老师及时帮助了我。她向我介绍学英语的方法,创造许多机会让我在课上练习口语。在她的帮助下,我的英语学习终于赶了上来。我开始对英语感兴趣了。从那之后,英语一直就是我最喜欢的学科。
  蔡老师就像一颗闪亮的星照亮了我前进的道路
  • 小学6年级 - 记叙文 - 记人
  • 字数:1667 投稿日期:2012-11-12 17:14:00

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