who can give me warm
新竹园中学六（8）班 潇潇24
我是第一次写英语作文，请多多提意见或者是语病。
Who can give me warm?
This is a question.
And now，l must make me myself warm.
Because no one can give me warm.
In my dream,
l am not far away from home.
But it is only a dream.
l hope,
In the future,
l can meet someone,
Who can give me warm.
小学1年级 - 记叙文 - 抒情字数：189 投稿日期：2009-11-21 18:52:00写的挺好的，语法错误没有，有一点不好就是内容过于单一了，give me warm出现的有点多了，呵呵，不过瑕不掩瑜~~---- By 小荷 2009-11-21 20:26:03