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My happy family

丁岗中心小学 柠檬巧克力

Now my father,my mother and I are in the same school,they are also my teachers. That’s very interesting!
          My happy family
   Hello! My name is Dai Yumeng,I’m a student. I’m 10 years old. I come from Zhenjiang. I'm a lovely girl. I like drawing and I also like reading. Look,this is my picture.Do you like it?
   There are three people in my family. My father, my mother and I.
My father is a PE teacher.He is 36 years old. He looks like Yao Ming. He likes sports and he plays basketball very well. He is a humor man.So all the students like him very much.
   My mother is a Chinese teacher.She’s 34 years old. She is a pretty woman.She’s thin .She is not tall.Her hair is long. Every day she gets up early and goes home late. She works very hard and she loves her job and her students.
   Now my father ,my mother and I are in the same school ,they are also my teachers. That’s very interesting!Do you think so?I love them and they love me.That’s my happy family!
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    » YANG妍 评论 2010-10-22
    戴雨萌你也在小荷网上写作文啊,这篇英语作文写得不错啊!
    柠檬巧克力 回复: 奖5分 (2010-10-27)
    啊~~~嗯嗯
    » 卜佳棋 评论 2010-9-20
    写的很好 佩服 10岁 三年级 太棒了 虽然不太会用 不过已经很好了
    柠檬巧克力 回复: 奖4分 (2010-9-20)
    谢谢评点!~~~~~(⊙o⊙)哦
    » 芯芯芯的我 评论 2010-9-17
    因为他写的是英文有很多人看不懂,我是看懂啦,不过有一些地方用词不当
    柠檬巧克力 回复: 奖4分 (2010-9-20)
    请指教!~~
    » 杨啸林 评论 2010-9-17
    英文能写那么多,佩服!
    柠檬巧克力 回复: 奖5分 (2010-9-20)
    谢谢!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~