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父亲,我将永远爱你

错过的陌路。 冰雪水灵儿

专辑:山东平阴县第四中学《小荷文苑》

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  Dad,I will always love you
Oh ,Dad,I will always love you!
 I love your black hair,big eyes ,thick eyebrows ,broad shoulders and etc.And I also like your plump belly.It is very cute.So,I think you are the best father in the world.
 You are kind and strict.I am not a careful  girl.I usually forget where my things are.Hoever ,you always tell me,"Please be more careful "when I can't find my things.And you also criticize me.So I will pay attention to my behavior.When I make mistakes,I will be sad and unhappy.But I also thank your criticizing.That can help me to grow.Sometimes I will cry ,but when this thing happen ,you always say ,"Don't cry,mr dear daughter.To be smiling.Your smilies are sunny."Then I will become happy again.
  Oh,my dear dad.I love you very much.I lve you forever.
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