Hey, how are we! My name is Peng Yu. I am an open and bright boy, so my hobby is very wide.
　　I like sports.。 I can play basketball, badminton, table tennis, and play football. Besides, I still have a bike ride. This is a sport!
　　I like to eat, I like to eat chicken, eggs, content, fish and milk. My mother is a super star chef, my father is very handsome. For the two of them, I like my mother, because my mother will give me a lot of delicious.
　　Besides, I also like singing, dancing and reading.

修改后：

　My name is Peng Yu. I am an open and bright boy, so my hobbies are very wide.

　I like sports. I can play basketball, badminton, table tennis, and football. Besides, I still like bike riding! I often do sports with my friends when I am free.

　 I like eating. I like chicken, eggs, fish and milk. Because my mother is a super star chef, she always cooks me a lot of delicious food.

　 I also like singing, dancing and reading.

修改老师：Andy老师

　　六年级:彭御嘉

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